Characteristics we are born with, have more influence on our personality and development than experiences we may have in our life. Which is the major influence?
It is irrefutable fact that people’s characteristics are god gifted and possess inborn skills. However, others have opposed this opinion which is claimed that an individual’s trait gets more affecting to in undertaking their life. From my perspective, that in both matters will be influencing on human lives.
It is widely acknowledged that the nature characteristic is what determines our behaviours, appearance and how to perform in looking at the world, all of these passes through by genetics. Indeed, a newborn or a preschooler that they are possessed separate in their traits, as it means that is when is deprived of any things such as toys or stuff are concerned. This is manifested that they might take their items in fast, whereas, with a person who is easily frightened in bad situations that will be able to shed tears.
On the other hand, humans may carry on similar characteristics such as fear, agility, modesty, or even embarrassment in facing risk conditions. Nevertheless, human willpower will be changing all manners happening in their lives. Giving evidence to support this argument, a person who was used to swimming beforehand that wouldn’t be scared all failing down into the water as compared to others had never been doing that. Other instances are giving that an individual has been undergone mass of interviews that be more confident than others had.
In conclusion, human beings are born with certain traits that are majoring to modification in their developing behaviours patterns. Nevertheless, they need to acquire the new things executed with practising geared towards a better life with their characteristics.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, whereas, as to, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26136363636 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07291768805 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640151515152 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2041856082 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.75 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170440871655 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546177842977 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395603260578 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987727408942 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407908883202 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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