The chart below gives information about the prices of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia, over a two-week period in 2013.
Summarize the information by selecting reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Given are the two charts depicting the airfare of an undetermined Australian air carrier from Sydney to Melbourne and vice versa, during a period of two weeks in 2013.
It is conspicuous that there was a drastic escalation in the expenditure paid for the shuttle between Sydney and Melbourne on three consecutive end-days of two weeks. Furthermore, the highest price in both routes was documented in the first week.
Regarding week one, 80 dollars was the highest amount of money that passengers spent on Monday and Friday’s flights from Sydney to Melbourne and backward, respectively. The flattest cost to pay for any flights on Tuesday, Wednesday and Thursday between Sydney and Melbourne was all under 40 dollars. However, the airfare for trips surged to 70 dollars and over on Friday prior to witnessing the constant diminution to Sunday at the cost of roughly 50 dollars, this was true in both ways.
When it comes to the second week, the price fluctuated from Tuesdays to Weekends was comparable in two lines; however, on Monday, the price diminished substantially to approximately under 50 dollars from over 60 dollars when compared with the first week. Moreover, the airfare from Melbourne to Sydney was more stable than the opposite way from Tuesday to Thursday with 35 percent maintenance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Given are the two charts depicting the airfare of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, moreover, regarding, second
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13551401869 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.790126616 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565420560748 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.0104709081 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.375 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172994932584 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844531057693 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474188705209 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122183312914 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407409071169 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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