The chart below illustrates the result of a survey on the types of houses people liked, taken in 2005.

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The chart below illustrates the result of a survey on the types of houses people liked, taken in 2005.

The bar graph demonstrate the various type of house result was liked by the individuals which who survey find by the British over the time period of 2005.
Overall, what stand out from the graph is that while popularity of the Cambridge flats grow over the period in question, and that of detached houses remained high through out, the number of people depended on semi detached houses and is rapidly changed. Terraced houses, mean while, saw an increase followed by drop.
With regard to terraced houses and semi detached houses, the starting figures of London roughly identical at 16 and 18 percent people's respectively. However, where as the flats climbed in London and reached 58 percent. Before levelling off for the remainder of period, the Cambridge in detached house slipped to half this figure.
Turning to the higher buildings, flats stayed consistently popular, with houses figure remaining between 58 and 8 percent throughout the period. Oxford terraced houses popularity was nearly as high as semi detached in Cambridge. With the number of houses rising 15 to 18 percent . finally than detached houses were dramatically changed after that it slightly grow up at reached at the 19 percent and as same as semi detached significantly swift .

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, while, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11219512195 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60875827443 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590243902439 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6139915037 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.8 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148108756867 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603459950109 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575953513691 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107339118589 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610948141754 0.056905535591 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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