In today's scenario, obesity in children is a serious issue all over the world. There are a plethora of reasons for this. This essay will discuss the causes why childhood obesity becoming a serious problem and what preventive measures could be used to tackle this obstacle.
Firstly, it is deemed that children prefer junk food, burger, drinks, for example in order to satisfy their curiosity. Why they prefer fast food? This is due to the hectic time schedule of their parents. A survey was conducted by WHO in 2020 and concluded that parents neglect the eating habits of their children and busy with their workplace responsibilities. As a result, their young ones prefer to order online for food which directly affects their body mechanism and causes serious ailments obesity, for instance. Secondly, lack of exercise is another important factor related to the above-mentioned health problem. Children prefer to spend time while watching T.V, playing video games. Therefore, do not interact with the ecosystem outside the home boundaries. Thus, suffer from serious diseases.
There are numerous possible solutions to overcome this problem. First and foremost is the parent's intention as the parents need to spend at least two hours per day with their young ones to provide them nutrient-enriched food. Another solution is to spend some time with their children and educate them about the merits of doing outdoor activities, playing soccer for example. Therefore, children come to know how they effectively manage their health problems and protect their body system from obesity.
In conclusion, there are a plethora of solutions that could be used to mitigate the problems related to health. Parents should be educated and able to manage their personal and professional life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29577464789 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65952081811 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580985915493 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9434260312 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5555555556 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7777777778 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195056397602 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065706124167 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979002644487 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154312666284 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131747029355 0.056905535591 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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