Nowadays, more children are overweight than ever before. In my view, unhealthy eating habits and physical inactivity have given rise to this obesity pandemic among minors, still, the government and parents can take proper measures to mitigate it.
There are two main factors contributing to childhood obesity. An obvious reason is that the current younger generation has poor access to healthy meals. As fast food items appeal to parents due to their affordability and availability, children are usually given such convenience foods which contain a lot of greasy ingredients. Were it not for junk food products, children would be maintaining a healthy diet, and the obesity rate could possibly fall. Another deep-rooted cause of this issue is a sedentary lifestyle. Not only do the youth lack discipline for regular exercise, but they also spend a great deal of time playing video games and watching television as opposed to engaging in outdoor activities. Considering these great contributors to excessive weight gain, it is hardly surprising to see obese children.
Nevertheless, there are feasible ways in which this issue can be dealt with. First, politicians have the potential to impose a ban on the sale of fast food products and promote the proliferation of healthy foods. Bermuda, for instance, has banned fast food sales in the country and, thereby, prevented people, in particular young children, from gaining extra weight. However, given this is unlikely to happen in many countries, parents should take on responsibility for their children’s health. More specifically, they ought to encourage their offspring to eat healthy foods and do daily exercise from an early age to stay slim and healthy. The sooner we take action, the fewer children will experience this health problem.
In conclusion, I believe that poor diets and a lack of physical activity have created an obesogenic environment, but governing bodies and parents can generate viable solutions to halve childhood obesity.
- There have been many inventions in the human history such as the wheel Some people think the most important thing is the internet To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 67
- Some people say that playing computer games is bad for children in every way Others say that playing computer games can have positive effects on the way children develop 73
- With growing population in cities more and more people live in a home with small or no outdoor areas Is it a positive or negative development 78
- With growing population in cities more and more people live in a home with small or no outdoor areas Is it a positive or negative development 61
- With growing population in cities more and more people live in a home with small or no outdoor areas Is it a positive or negative development 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 432, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'could'.
Suggestion: could
...ng a healthy diet, and the obesity rate could possibly fall. Another deep-rooted cause of this...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in particular, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3873015873 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85764369508 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650793650794 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.613679757 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0625 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140691130216 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453530684507 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416428417658 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827885809762 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0108992495014 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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