Nowadays, education is very necessary for each individual. Education institutions have focus on academic breakthroughs and cracking examinations. While, fundamentals skills should learn from family instead of schools. As far as I am concerned , i totally disagree to this notion, and i would argue that teaching practical skills is essential.
Firstly , it is true that all students will be not able to get job in this highly competitive job market therefore, teaching fundamental skills to kids are essential. As a consequence, they are likely to become wage earner. In addition to this ,all students can not have capability to pass exams, others who not have enough ability to pass exam , consider themselves as a failure. For instance, a survey conducted by Leds Trinity College found that every 25 out 100 students have excellent skill to crack exam and other 75 were not good enough to achieve academic subjects.
Furthermore, some skills are difficult to learn at home because of lack of equipments. For example, woodwork required number of tools and safety cloths thereby these tools are not available at home. Although University charge some ammount of money from students as a teaching fees , they offer education on practical skills with safety as well as skills are taught in under safety condition. As well as this , children will never learn skills at home if they have busy parents .To illustrate this ,The time of India published that , majority of children lack at fundamental skill because they have busier parents.
To sum up , i disagree that students should only consider academic study because both academic learning and practical skills are important and should be teach at school.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20363636364 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78592763493 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578181818182 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1010450631 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.076923077 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226812025213 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820078453744 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826678279827 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161862126961 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089881281623 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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