Childhood obesity has become a serious problem in recent years. What are the primary cause of this? What measures should be taken to reduce childhood obesity?
It is true that the number of childhood obesity has increased seriously as a global issue. This phenomenon can be attributed to various reasons, and solutions should be taken in numerous ways to alleviate the circumstance.
There are two main reasons associated with this situation. The first reason relates to eating habits. They eat many snacks in a day. Also, parents in the developing society are more occupied so the best choice to save time is to call ready meals for kids which contain t\high sugary, oily,... In addition, youngsters tend to engage in screen-time activities rather than spend time participating in physical sports. As a result, those who suffer from overweight at an early age.
Fortunately, several measures could be taken to tackle this issue. The first solution would be to raise awareness of improving the level of health. Especially, education makes healthier food choices that follow the food pyramid. Furthermore, parents should encourage kids to do exercises regularly which helps them improve both mental and physical health. Also, the government needs to provide more sports centers or health clubs.
In conclusion, this phenomenon can be explained in many aspects. However, solutions can be taken to resolve this issue. In the near future, it is predicted that
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, so, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25480769231 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75023112934 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673076923077 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5795214098 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.3125 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171381091883 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514393259109 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068928654314 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117997628724 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912039778669 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.28 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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