Childhood obesity is a serious problem in many countries. What are the causes of it and how can the problem be managed?
Corpulence has become a nerve-racking issue in several nations throughout the world, especially the developed ones. There are numerous causes given the rise of this adverse phenomenon and solutions should be taken to combat this problem
To begin with, there is a variety of explanations for the childhood obesity nowadays. First and foremost, there is excessive consumption of preprocessed foods and beverages. It is irrefutable that these days junk food franchises can be found in every corner of the world and took place of the traditional meals to become youngster's favourite dishes. Unfortunately, these meals, which reportedly have inadequate sanitation, are responsible for various health diseases include obesity. The hamburger that is salty, greasy and highly contains artificial sweeteners can be a good case in point. Another reason led to the fatness among children is from the advancement of the technologies, which resulted in the major change of lifestyle. There seem to be shreds of evidence that children these days are having physical inactivity for quite some time. This is shown by the increase in the number of children keen on playing video games or using the social network rather than having outdoor recreational activities when compared to the last few decades
Fortunately, there are some actions to be taken for tackling this hassle. First of all, competitions or activities should be organized more frequently with the aim of energy expenditure and raising children well-being. Furthermore, these events can also be a good means of keeping them away from the screen and tightening the family-bonding. Secondly, when it comes to nutrition, there should be an appropriate diet that has all the essential nutrients for the healthy and comprehensive development of the child. By the ways of illustration, it should be more television programmes that emphasis on building a healthful and proper regimen for children.
In conclusion, childhood fatness is caused by a shortage of physical activities and overeat of prepared foods. It was also suggested that more energy consumption events should be held and a healthy regimen should be built for the comprehensive growth of the child
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, by the way, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38040345821 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03699639315 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567723342939 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1088567053 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.466666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1333333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149995897608 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479379878981 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492848386621 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944170184881 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132967986544 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.