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These days, young people tend to find a paid job while they are still in school because they think that it helps them get more experiences. But some adults argued that doing work is not good for children. In my opinion, I encourage youngsters have a job . This essay will consider both opinions
First of all, There are many reasons why people worry when children handle a job. They reckon that the main responsibility of children is learning. Kids will neglect their studies because they spend a lot of time doing a job. Moreover, young people do not still develop full mental and physical health, so they can not cope with work pressures
On the other hand, the poor students apply for a paid work while they are studying at university. With their salary, they not only pay for their lives and studies independently but also support their family about financial problem. Besides, while doing a job, they learn a lot of work experiences in the future and improve important soft skills, such as leadership, team work,.... For example , when I was in the second year of unversity, I did a part time job as teaching asisstant at English center because I want to be an English teacher in the future. I got a lot of teaching skills during that time
In clude, doing a paid work besides study takes more advantages than disadvantages for children. In my opinion, young people should apply a part- time job to get more experiences and help their family, but they have to ensure their studies well
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, moreover, second, so, still, well, while, for example, such as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67300380228 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47610438302 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58174904943 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9799582002 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.416666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4166666667 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123612121586 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752863783118 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111576474924 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101371231565 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665823454182 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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