Children and TV
There is no doubt that TV programs are nowadays being increasingly watched by awide range of people in all ages . But the question : should our children be encouraged to watch it ? Remains a controversial issue with many different opinions regarding it .
On one side of the argument , there are some people who believe that the detrimental effect of the TV exceeds the beneficial one . One good reason for the adopting this outlook is that there is no guarantee that the bad behaviors involved in some of the programs will not passively pass to their children . Another illustration is the huge amount of time wasted as well as study distraction.
On the other hand , others do assume that the interesting way of presenting precious information having attractive colors and sound effects is way better than the traditional manners . They are convinced that the firstly mentioned tool if received by the young in an appropriate way would make them absorb it easier and in no time .
Personally , i stand in the middle between the two opinions . My firm conviction is that the mind taking route of wrapping tough information with fun has to be encouraged strongly . However , there must be a huge effort exerted from both parents and teachers to select the good content and for the strict time control .
To close , watching TV in the right quantity of time with a responsible supervision is a desirable strategy that better to be adopted in both home and school as atrial to broaden our kids horizons in an effortless way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, regarding, so, well, as to, no doubt, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90272373541 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77556594574 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626459143969 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0552344241 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153211075051 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471554929435 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584086882189 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818457434358 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737362070615 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.