Children are now less active in their free time that in the past. Therefore, sports lesson must be compulsory in schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, the development of science and technology, children spent their free time to watch TV or play video games instead of playing sports activity. I totally agree that the school need to give obligatory sports to their graduation program
some people believe that sports lesson is not more important than another subjects. Teenagers prefer studying to gifted subject as arts or music. In addition, some student have problem with their health and medical so that they cannot take part in obligatory sport in their class.
On the other hand, sports bring many benefits. Firstly, they can learn how to make teamwork, help each other to become the winner. This is an important skill for success in the future. Secondly, a few children are not successful in their education path but they become to professional athlete. In my high school, my classmate was Nam, he did not enjoy with any subject like math, history…but he loved swimming so much. Therefore his parents encourage him to concentrate on his favorite subject. Now he is gym teacher, he teaches the children who feel interested with sports. Besides that, sports can help children to have a good health and flexible so that they may improve their focus on other things
In summary, sports lessons is play important role to develop metal well-being for the children
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in addition, in summary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0407239819 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53389625049 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656108597285 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1713922247 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154843586271 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501308332043 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444574754759 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108348710881 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036512795116 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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