Children learnt best by observing the behaviour of the adults and copying it.Do you agree or disagree.
Blooming buds are the boon of nation as they contribute for the development and prosperity of their counties. However, all ïbudding flowers are not alike as they have different thinking power and interests. some teenagers prefer to imitate their families or other people, nevertheless re at of them do not want t follow the directions given to them by adults.
To begin with, a number of children learn a lot from elders and applying the same in their life. they learn social, ethical, moral and religious values from society and become disciplined person in their later age. Also, they show their interest in education by coming in the contact of highly qualified human beings. To illustrate, my brother has powerful social interaction with lawyers and doctors, therefore he is doing bachelor of law. Additionally the adolescents observe the life style of royal families and they are copying them by wearing branded clothes. Moreover, some juveniles become addicted of drugs by joining bad companies of adults. As a result, they spoil their life and do not achieve success.
On the contrary, some teenagers are very enthusiastic learners although th or parents or neighborhood is illiterate, but they want literate. they have strong desire to maintain their status and standard in society. therefore, they enrol themselves in prestigious universities to pursue their tertiary education. In addition, many children whose parents have addiction of drugs and do not look after their families properly, want be supportive. To exemplify, the boy in my neighborhood whose father always take alcohol and tobacco, is settled in Canada and giving big hand to his mother to fulfill the basic needs.
In conclusion, my personal perspective is that instead of imitating others the youngsters should have an ambition in their life and have to reach to building of success by hard work, efforts and passion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1986970684 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77877465045 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615635179153 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0583776543 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.75 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0583748031008 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0210195619995 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297194896825 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0314068753541 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262287900842 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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