Children nowadays watch significantly more television than those in the past, which reduces their activity levels accordingly.
Why is this the case? What measures can you suggest to encourage higher levels of activity among children?
Children spend more time on watching TV in nowadays than in the past so decreases the number of their activities. There are several causes of this issue and effective solutions should be produced to address this problem.
The problem happens for many reasons. Firstly, with the development of technology, it is easily seen that each household can have at least one television with a reasonable price. Secondly, the programme in the television are more attractive. In addition, these are improved in quality as well as increased in number so that it can lead children to watch for long hours without feeling bored. As I know, children in developed countries like the USA spend an average of about 3 hours a day watching television.
Several measures can be taken to increase the activity levels of children. Schools should organize more outdoor and indoor activities such as take exercise at morning, play sports at afternoon,... Beside that, families also play an important role in addressing the problem. Parents should limit the time children watch television and create more useful activities for children. For instance, in Vietnam, children are allowed to watch television for about 30 minutes a day. In addition, at the weekend parents take their children to the park to running or walking and join in outdoor activities.
In conclusion, there are some reasons that make children watch more television so that they spend less time taking exercise. However, this trend can reduce if solutions should be introduced to encourage higher levels of activity among children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...Children spend more time on watching TV in nowadays than in the past so decreases the numbe...
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Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...ise at morning, play sports at afternoon,... Beside that, families also play an im...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, at least, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18823529412 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72369809893 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564705882353 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1996955844 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.2 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360463651066 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123397022076 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106744408447 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233133841879 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839525743759 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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