Gone are the days when children have no right to live their life independently without their parents decision. In this world of modernization, it is argued that children more than 15 will be allowed to live their life freely with their own decision. Here, i would like to accord with given statement.
There are manifold points to support my point of view. First and foremost, young generation is capable enough to live life in their own ways as it helps them to become goal oriented. To explain, independent decision making at this help a child not only to achieve goals but also boost their self confidence in every aspects of life. Thus, decision make by their own self both increase their confidence and make them responsible. In addition, self decision make children easy to fix in new environment. Therefore, they are able to make friends easily and are co-operative in nature as well and they feel socially stronger.
Further emphasizing on my point of view. Professionally, children above 15 years are who are given an opportunity to make their own decision are more self reliant and self confident. For instance, in this jet age of 21st century they can explore their skills more as well as can enjoy managerial posts. Hence, Independence of making decision lead them challenging and creative youth. On the contrary, others have conflicting views.
Numerous points to explain its thorny side. Initially, children above 15 are not so mature and not so able to take their own decision . However, in this premature age they may distract towards negative sides without their parents guidance. As a result, parents guidance work as a lamp to brighten and secure their future bright.
To recapitulate, allowing children to make their own decision helps them to boost their confidence and will teach them to take responsibilities by themselves but this does not mean they should neglect their parents. In the end, a child is happy if he takes right decision at right time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, as a result, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96385542169 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71400041095 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542168674699 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.8946092184 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330696942031 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967142983456 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956432152416 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209090472812 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561975148905 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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