Today’s generation is not same as it was before. Children are now getting mature at very young age. In 20th century it is being argued that youngsters over 15 years are capable enough to take their own decision freely without taking guidence of their parents. Here i would like to give my opinion to the topic.
Young generation are very advance nowadays. They are very familiar with the current and upcoming technology. Age is now just a number. One can achieve high stardom, money, status, etc. at a very young age. Children are now becoming mature at a very young age. Though 15+ age is not a childish age. Children know what they are doing and what they want to achieve. There carrer are either influenced by their mentor or their celebrity idol. Knowing the world and situation, children know what to with their life and can settle their future very well. Legeal age of driving is 16, for voting its 18, this makes it clear that if our laws think 16 is the age of driving and 18 for voting than I think children above 15 can decide their future too.
However, parents support , guidence, manners, etc are equally important. Without their support their children are nothing. Guardians are too responsible for their children’s future. They should prepare their ward to face the problem and handle the situation effectively. The lessons taught by the parents to their son or daughter derives their attitude in the future.
I am in the support to the statement that children above 15 years are capable enough to take their own decisions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8171641791 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43793624172 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55223880597 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4601412281 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.4761904762 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.7619047619 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.42857142857 7.06120827912 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321281783745 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091339568937 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114722131583 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234998508864 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667777741301 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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