Children today are too dependent on computers
and electronic entertainment. It would be better to
encourage them to spend more time outside
playing sports and games. Do you agree or
disagree with this statement? Give your opinion.
Technology has brought a gigantic revolution in this jet age of 21st century to upsurge the standard of human beings. Presently, It has been extremely debatable whether stimulating the offsprings to spend more time outside playing sports and games could be lucrative for overall development of a child or not. Here, I would like to accord with given statement firmly.
There are multifarious points can be put down to shore up my point of view. First and foremost, sports play a magnificent role to make life healthy, wealthy and exotic. For example, playing sport games by the children give a ...
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playing sport games by the children give a chance
playing sport games by the children gives a chance
playing sports games enable the children
playing sports games enables the children
technology play a vital role
technology plays a vital role
technology not only boost their mind level but also make them a goal oriented person
technology not only boosts their mind level but also makes them a goal oriented person
technology help them
technology helps them
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