As a result of the convenience brought by the continuous technological inventions, even a simple computer are equipped with all the multi-functions it takes to searching for information within a short while. Thus, there isn’t a need to be moving out at all, whilst everyone is seen to be using a portable one in hand. At the continuity, the physical movement of children is greatly minimized.
Upon the continuous technological inventions, a trend of computers launched in the present market are readily equipped with multifunctions and sensors it takes to be keying by a keyboard. Kids do not need to talk with each other for computers enable them to maximize their time online chat through social media channels. Parents should take the role to guide them the crucial aspect of having entertainment outside home by increasing their time playing with friends. In due course, the leisure time spent outdoor is reduced.
It does no good not until kids are urged in maximizing to the extracurricular activities held outdoor areas, there would not a chance of them to stay healthy body and whilst have a relaxing mind by having entertainment outdoors. Schools should arouse their awareness of the vitality of doing sports and having funtime cannot be missed out. Not until then, they obtain a peace of mind after releasing their sweat from playing sports activities, stress is minimized to carry on with their schoolwork once they are all relaxed.
Overall, I am convinced that nothing can be more vital than having fun outdoors, as it brings favourable outcomes to interpersonal as well as one’s positive mind.
- The diagrams below show the design for a wind turbine and its location.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. 56
- As compared to the past children these days spend more of their leisure time indoors with computers and TV and less time outdoors Describe some of the problems this lack of outdoor leisure time can cause and suggest at least one possible solution 65
- The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. 71
- Because of the busy pace of modern life, many children spend most of their time indoors and have little exposure to the natural world. Discuss the effects lack of experience with and understanding of nature can have on children as they grow up. 61
- Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventfully replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation.To what extent do u agree or disagree with this opinion? 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, thus, well, while, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12781954887 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94338575479 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624060150376 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9028017206 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135171297391 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508777705395 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0212751334205 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747413036368 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028562322965 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.