Children today spend more time watching television than they did in the past
Describe some of the advantages and disadvantages of television for children.
Nowadays, most of the children cannot take away their eyes from watching something on the television or on the computers as compared in the old days. They are so inclined on tuning in to youtube channels viewing their favorite cartoon character, singing alongside a character from disney channels and watching their favorite local shows whether it is educative or not. There are numerous outcomes for this trend both positive and negative.
The attractive colors and sounds on the telly have gained viewership from the very young audiences. The impact was great that children were found to be less active when spending activities outside. Most of their time were consumed in a room with
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... their time were consumed in a room with
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 579.0 1615.20841683 36% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 113.0 315.596192385 36% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12389380531 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2603904387 4.20363070211 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51268221867 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 176.041082164 47% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.734513274336 0.561755894193 131% => OK
syllable_count: 180.0 506.74238477 36% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2395669337 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 7.06120827912 5% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154828768772 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639092189637 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521591851881 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107963144371 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256084559947 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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