Children's education is expensive. In some countries, the government pays some some or all costs. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages
Nowadays, the cost of education is definitely high and some countries spend a great amount of money in order to pay that price. Personally, in my opinion, there are more positive aspects than negative aspects.
On the one hand, the government pays cost of education instead of citizens and there are myriad of benefits. First of all, education become accessible for children of all pauper families and every members of society are able to receive education. Thus, considering that tuition fee is exorbitant in some countries, destitute families are not able to provide their children with education during upbringing time period, while it is one of the main factors that effected to humans' future career, personality and overview. For example, majority of scant families' children can not get fortunate job prospects as a consequence of lack of education and it is not enable them in order to get promotion in their work place. Another positive aspect is that, in terms of paying tuition fee by government, illiteracy rate of country reduce considerably. Therefore, it become affordable for everyone and taken into account that education is the corner stone of development of country, it leads state to improve economically. For instance, people, who possess particular knowledge, are able to work more professionally.
On the other hand, allocating more money on education by government has some drawbacks. One of the negative factors is that, investing money on education effect to budget of country significantly. Hence, the government can fund more money on other issues such as economy or representing country over the world, however education is also necessary and the states should supply their citizens with free of charge education.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinions, in my point of view, the situation has tones of advantages for both citizens and government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25742574257 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89749429865 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554455445545 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9706753454 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.538461538 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7692307692 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20737737146 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737572290173 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675293691624 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112718634578 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528612170539 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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