In cities and towns all over the world the high volume of traffic is a problem. What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?

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In cities and towns all over the world the high volume of traffic is a problem. What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?

There is no about that the big amount of transports has been causing a plethora of issues in human’s life. This essay will give further insights into some negative consequences associated with this trend as well as several ways that are able to be applied to address them.
The significantly rising of utilizing private vehicles in recent years is causing some problems related to residents in many parts of the world. Firstly, the more transports are used, the more carbon dioxide emission discharged to the atmosphere. The worsening air quality will inevitably give rise to a wide range of chronic conditions such as cardiovascular complaints and respiratory illnesses. Secondly, the presence of many vehicles on the road is the source of traffic congestion in metropolitan areas. For example, thousands of motorbikes are stuck in Hoang Hoa Tham street which is located Ho Chi Minh city for a very long time in peak hours.
However, there are still some solutions that could be taken by the government to deal with the above issues. It is advisable that the authorities had better upgrade the existing structures of the public transport. If the quality of general vehicles, namely buses and trains is improved and the cost is cheaper, there will be more people use public transports instead of personal cars. Thereby, the number of traffic jams may decrease in the not too distant future. Furthermore, the political leaders should also launch education programs to encourage citizens use general transport. For instance, the teachers in school could organise a short course about the shortages and consequences of using private vehicles to raise awareness of students of protecting community.
In conclusion, various methods should be adopted in a swiping attempt to solve the problems which are arised from the existence of a plenty of transport in modern life.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
There is no about that the big amount of transports...
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Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eneral vehicles, namely buses and trains is improved and the cost is cheaper, the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18811881188 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81619310229 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617161716172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1005610554 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.285714286 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6428571429 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134841965616 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380621260671 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415141162189 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819351589479 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274361357982 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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