As a human, being superior to all classes of living things present in the world, it is our responsibility to take care of the rights of other fellow beings and as well as animals. Any kind of injustice, bias and potential favouritism is discouraged. The moot question is that either the zoos are helping or hurting our animals or should they be banned. This essay will express agreement with this statement and will provide reasons to support the viewpoints.
Firstly, all the animals are nature-loving, with their habits being open spaces, jungles, and forests. It has been studied and found that the animals raised in captivity behave differently with their wilder counterparts. Consider a situation when an animal mother having a baby in her belly is isolated from her family including the husband and the spouses and put into captivation. All the animals have the primary senses of love, sympathy, and affection like the normal human beings. Moreover, just putting them into captivation for the sake of amusement is a daunting task.
Secondly, as per the studies conducted it has been found that animals are not treated properly in the zoos of the underdeveloped countries. As many of these species demand a high quality of food and proper sheltering with ample space, in the underdeveloped countries, it becomes difficult to bear their expenses for the proper living.
To recapitulate and in the view of the above-presented points, I will reckon that there should be surveys made to the forestry and jungles in protected cars where the visitors can be pleasured by viewing these animals in the natural surroundings. For the case, if they are to be kept in the zoos then proper look after should be done under the supervision of a regulatory wildlife authority.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01694915254 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85516712581 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596610169492 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5403285668 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.846153846 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236298829749 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082963193961 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820197962632 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13170746995 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386895551372 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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