In 1970, a group of people raised a concern on whether animals have the same rights as those enjoyed by human beings. This argument started a crucial debate on whether zoos are a good habitate for animals. On one side stands a perspective that zoos are hurting animal rather than actually protecting or conserving them. This essay will discuss why zoos are not just the right place for animals.
Zoos have failed to serve their purpose and rather than helping the animals they are tormenting them day and night. Forest is the natural habitate for most of the wild animals and they grow their naturally
with their innate skills. These animals faces a lot of problems growing in a restricted environment where not only their growth is impeded but their life span is also curtailed.
For example a lion cub learn hunting from its parents in the forest, however in zoos the animals are kept isolated from each other and thus a cub is deprived of learning those hunting skills.
Thus, zoos does not provide the apt environment for these predators to grow naturally.
Secondly, zoos have become more of a commercial place where animals are kept with the purpose of exhibition. The staff is least bothered in taking care of the animal from the perspective of a care taker.
In many zoos, a lot of illegal activities are carried out under the covers which includes but not limited to smuggling of animal skin and many more precious body parts. It clearly beats the entire
objective of conserving the animals.
In conclusion, zoos are contriving in bringing an imbalance to the nature. This essay discussed how zoos are not beneficial for the animals and cause more destruction to their life. Clearly banning zoo should be the first step to protect the animal rights.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85808580858 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42174970542 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551155115512 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4623322448 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262145675146 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932784870757 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599358051135 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102473524677 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076830203266 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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