To make room for new generation, employees have been expected to leave their job at age 55 while they are still useful and competent. Implementing such enforcement upon workforce is against basic foundation of any democratic society. I’m of opinion that people should be granted prerogative to decide for themselves. I will assert my opinion regarding the matter.
To begin with. Dealing with unforeseen circumstances and fulfilling company’s future goal are nearly impossible for newly employed recruits because it needs so much work and accumulated experience in order to make correct decision accordingly. Older peoples in workforce are essential for company’s survival, although they may not have energy level and pliant mind of youth. A company can be more prosperous when it has both in its recruits to take advantage of brilliant insight of young and experience of old. Bill gates, for example, has been a pioneer in computer software world and established a digital empire. Now as more mature CEO, he may be at verge of being knocked down by new digeraties. However, the experience he has gathered during all these years keeps him on the top.
Finally, without old people in company who is going to show the ropes to the young. So combing the innovation of younger workers and older people’s expertise can guarantee the success of business. Besides, how government can support retirement pension at this very early age while the life expectancy is over 70 years of age.
Overall, retirement at age of 55 should be a matter of choice concerning how efficient they can find themselves in prospering economy and development of firm. It’s indispensable part of any business to build its foundation on obtained knowledge of older workers and the creativity of younger ones.
- Some people think that cultural traditions will be destroyed if they are used as money making attractions aimed at tourists Others however believe that is the only way to save these traditions Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 90
- Some people believe that anyone can create art such as painting, poetry, music and so on. Others think that a person should have special abilities to create art. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 89
- Some people say that playing computer games is bad for children in every way. Others say that playing computer games can have positive effects on the way children develop 84
- Some people believe the government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion 68
- although more and more people are reading news on the internet, most people still prefer reading the news in a newspaper. What are your views? 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, finally, however, if, may, regarding, so, still, while, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23448275862 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96993255908 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655172413793 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1740010275 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.875 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178196947724 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531518554028 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424150027914 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106937862522 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425261253299 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.