Competition increases in every person's life .To what extend do you agree or disagree ?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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In this modern era , competition play essential role in ever...
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...ithout competition, we do not know about our mistakes. ...
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...on, we do not know about our mistakes. Basides that, competition has greatly im...
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...atly impact on all the children. However , nowadays competition has extremely incr...
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...ly increased at all the places. Although , l agree that competition increases the ...
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...f every child and every person. Moreover , it is true that 'practice can make...
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... more perfect. Competition also teaches to work hard in life of every person. Furthermo...
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...ard in life of every person. Furthermore , l notify that only the hard work is key...
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...t only the hard work is key to success. In the epilogue , competition is more an...
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... In the epilogue , competition is more and more heavy than...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 41.998997996 29% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 524.0 1615.20841683 32% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 99.0 315.596192385 31% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29292929293 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.15434214553 4.20363070211 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05312003533 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 71.0 176.041082164 40% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.717171717172 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 168.3 506.74238477 33% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 8.47363376219 49.4020404114 17% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.2222222222 106.682146367 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.0 20.7667163134 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308551637757 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113447664383 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107333215973 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154445059019 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106691011174 0.056905535591 187% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.85 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.22 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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