A child of today is men of tomorrow.Nowadays, technology plays significant impact on all the children. Then, we are talk about that merit or demerits of technology which has greater influence on their children.
To begin with, there are numerous types of advantages of technology in this modern world.First and foremost, new technology has very popular among the children.In addition to that, children spent more time on devices.Hence, they gain knowledge and develop new skills.Furthermore, they are also known about all over the world by social media.Moreover, sometimes it helps to chatting with all friends and relatives from technology. Apart from that, many technological gadgets for instance mobile phones, laptops, i-pads, computers to entertain the mind for all children.In spite of that, technology has changed everyone life style.
However, then, there are some disadvantages of technology which influence of all children. Primarily, children mostly spend their time on devices means playing games, longer time chatting with friends and approximately 14hours a day on added to internet. Therefore, it is very harmful for all children. Although, children suffer many diseases related to health such as weak eye-side, stress.
In the epilogue, it is true that technology is indispensable part of everyone's life. But, children should think that they gave limited time spend on internet. End of this topic , we can say that it is good to add with newly technology , however overtime spend on internet is risky for health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, apart from, for instance, in addition, such as, in spite of, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42857142857 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12728805126 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609243697479 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 100.694940659 49.4020404114 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 117.454545455 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.2727272727 7.06120827912 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307706065079 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112587749719 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460821946384 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183950829383 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235146643352 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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