Competitiveness is a positive quality for people to have among most societies. How does this competitiveness affect individuals? Do you think it is a positive or negative trend?
There is no doubt that competitiveness is, by and large, one of the most striking traits of human. It is often argued that it is detrimental to people’s lives; nevertheless, I believe it also brings about benefits. The way rivalry impacts on each person and its merits and demerits would be presented in this essay.
The major effects of competitiveness could be noticeably felt at the workplace and school. Not only do company’s leaders seek for outstanding employees who prove to be competitive to lead team-work but customers also have desires for products and services with competitive prices. Apparently, rivalry plays as an indispensable motivation, stimulating students to pass exams with flying colors to become top in their class. For the most part, competitiveness is availably existing in every aspect of daily lives.
There is a common belief that this quality adversely affects individuals. First of all, the excessive focus on being the best could mislead people, by all means even committing crimes or doing harm to other colleagues, in order to reach their goals. Secondly, students are prone to be constantly under extreme pressure if they are obsessed with high marks, high ranks and impressive certificates, which might result in the risks of autism and depression.
However, I am in the favor of the view that the advantages of competitiveness are more significant. Entering a competition could be seen as an excellent opportunity for everyone to challenge themselves, breaking comfort zones, and prove their potentials. Furthermore, it seems that the more ambitious one child is, the greater possibility of success he gains. This is because he could be aware of his rivalries, fearless of any failures and eager to make more and more progress.
In conclusion, competitiveness is undoubtedly a feature of human’s personalities that should be taken into cautious consideration to upgrade its advantages and lessen its disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tages and lessen its disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, no doubt, by and large, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37741935484 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26801578319 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641935483871 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8821627373 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.133333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18357632203 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624125498357 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544738396499 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915492370545 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487230344726 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.