Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to
become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their
old ways and adapt to local customs and codes of behavior.
Do you agree or disagree?
In this day and ages, it seems that more people are immigrating than ever before, which undoubtedly raises certain questions on the integration of such newcomers. Despite valid arguments to it, I would argue that it is the responsibility of immigrants to adapt to indigenous customs in order for a harmonious community.
It is manifest that only do immigrants comply with accepted rules and codes of behaviors in their adopted country that the society’s order could be strictly maintained. Imagine chaos will arise on streets as a result of a British man driving on his left hand in Vietnam, where every driver must legally drive on their right. Two other salient examples are same-sex marriages or gambling, thus it is critical for all immigrants to obey laws in a new country regardless of any differences to ones in their homeland.
More importantly, to avoid cultural conflicts, there is a must for newcomers to show respect to local inhabitants. Though other’s culture could be strange and ridiculous to some extents, it has existed for a long time and had its own perks which might be overlooked without full consideration. Take the belief in God among Vietnamese citizens, which is often mistakenly regarded as superstition by Western immigrants, as an example. In fact, those foreigners may not understand that it is a part of the spiritual life, encouraging people to commit benefaction.
Admittedly, cultural diversity should not be underestimated as it could bring cultural booming in several circumstances. Nonetheless, this variety could lead to an accelerating tension among people of different nationalities, the primary cause of violence and gun overuse in many countries such as America.
By way of conclusion, as boundaries between two countries are prone to be blurred, the outbreak of immigration seems to be insurmountable. Therefore, extra consideration should be furthered.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34105960265 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24883039076 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645695364238 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.192941219 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.076923077 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221360710959 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06814237286 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635845430343 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109174445221 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665993270221 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.