Competitiveness is regarded as a positive quality for people in most societies. How does competitiveness affect individuals? Is it a positive or negative trend?
We live in an age when most aspects of our lives are connected with competition due to the need to succeed. It can be beneficial to the community in terms of work productivity and so economy enhancements, with that being said it also can lead to negative effects such as health problems and personal issues.
Commencing with advantages of competitive environment, it has an influence on your working efficiency positively. Owing to the rivalry people will be more encouraged to study and work, hence the outcome of their efforts will be better. For example, majority of the teachers use competitions to make students study harder and also boost their retention of the information about the given topic. What is more, there is a competition amongst all of the countries in the world concerning the economy, it affects the quality of the products and services. It means the need and ambition to be the best leads to the better output regarding quality and quantity, increasing people’s standards of life. Therefore I believe that competitiveness is the main factor of improvements in life.
Regarding the drawbacks of rival, it can trigger the pressure in the workplace, which may have effects on working too. Most of the people have health issues because of the stress at work. Take businessmen for instance, after their stressful life they start having bad habits like smoking, alcohol addiction. On top of that, people lose trust in others and that hinders them to build social life. That loneliness make them unhappy and lose interest in living, because interaction with others is vital. So, it can lead to severe problems.
Weighing up both sides, I reckon that there are more benefits from competing within the realm of both education and work, and you can control negative results by your actions and choices.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i reckon, in fact, such as, what is more, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02640264026 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74910558195 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600660066007 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4637884948 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.533333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17136781603 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557380136379 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409602365347 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877252892064 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619415898124 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.