Computer are becoming an assential part of school lessons. Discuss the advantage and disadvantages and give your opinion.
Computer are increasing knowledge day by day. Nevertheless, one of the most controversial issues today relates to an assential part of school lessons. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both point of views.
On one side of the argument there are people who argue that the benefits of considerable about weight it is disadvantages. the main reason for believing this is that it's very important of nature. because all people are usesing everyday. Wherever this is increasing knowledge day by day. As well as less burden of books have a decreasing and easy show this equation. futher more that is children uses everytime and rise knowledge. It is also possible to say that computer is very helpful and from fill online Essy. One good illustration of this is that is uses like a Railway Station.
On the other hand, it is also possible to make the opposing case. It is often argued that infact health issues whereas people have to face on the computer and because eyes effect and eyes light decreases. Whereas they are not body moment and these are not friends circle because they not go and Friend circle declined people often have this opinion because lazy lifestyle and these are awerness weakness all time . A second point is that less activities people are came down awerness.
Conclusion as we have seen there are number of answer to this question on balance, however I tend to believe that computer are very increasses a knowledge but people that is uses came down.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, well, whereas, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80620155039 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54053467275 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550387596899 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.9224226615 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0863509666806 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0278655736838 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609871416873 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0643761672219 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06591312562 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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