Computers are integrated into almost every device nowadays. The price of a computer has been falling steadily. They have become so affordable that anyone can afford to buy them. Computer technologies have simplified life for everyone. They have enabled people to work from home or anywhere. Learning is no longer restricted to classrooms, there is more to learn online than from any classroom. The meaning of computer technologies is no longer limited to personal computers like desktops and laptops. The technology is in phones, medical equipment, cars, houses and just about everywhere.
The advent of computers has ushered in an era of remote workplaces, markets, medicine and learning. Many large companies allow employees to work from home as they could do everything they need to without going to the office physically. The most inaccessible places are now connected to the information superhighway. Computers have created a virtual world that is transforming human life profoundly. Much good came out of the development of this technology. In the future unimaginable things can be made possible by computers. People could be relieved from all manual, tedious work and focus on more productive and higher functions. There may be unintended consequences of the accessibility of computer technology. The use of information technology for criminal activity is a side effect. Counterfeiting and identity theft has become more prevalent due to easy availability of computers.
Overall benefits of computers outweighs the drawbacks. Without this technology modern living as we know it would come to a standstill. Computers keep us safe, they protect us, work for us and help enhance our lives. It is one of the greatest inventions ever that has positively served humanity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38489208633 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06924763441 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629496402878 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.9821352584 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.0454545455 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6363636364 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.818181818182 7.06120827912 12% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215372195372 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530013087059 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306956628814 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136672820486 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271926909052 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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