Currently with extreme modernization and technology oriented world, over dependance on computers has had an obvious negative impact on the society. Humans are now made to work like machines and their inturn dependency on computers has had a more negative than positive impact.
Firstly, in the past individuals would suffer from lesser known diseases. Nowadays, diseases such as frozen shoulder, fibromylagia, spondilitis and spondylosis are at an upsurge. Eye related issues are serving the top of disease list with more youth and children wearing spectacles due to excessive strenuous hours spent on screen. Recent study done in India has explained how taking a break for every ten minutes off on screen time is essential to lessen the stress related diseases which computers are accounting to. Computer engineers have a weirder pattern of work, serving hours in front of the machine they suffer more from arthritis, arthralgia, joint pain and golfers elbow. Secondly, chronic diseases like heart strokes, obesity, hypertension are aceing up due to chronic sedentary lifestyles created as an impact of over dependance on this technology.
Over dependance on computers has made human's life robotic, with less interaction and more liability towards social media. Dinner table conversations, family lunches and interaction of children with parents are sweet memories of the past. With acclimatization of this technology, crime rate has also been seen to climb up. In the past committing a crime needed assistance and some planning, these days a bomb or any explosive can be generated by searching online faster then ever with readily available materials.
Inspite of computers being the forefront of current generation, their over powering effect on human cannot be overlooked. As essential as they seem in todays world, their affect on human population has been drastic with lesser advantages than disadvantages.
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- The free movement of goods across national borders has long been a controversial issue. Some people argue that it is necessary for economic growth, while others claim that it damages local industries. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 65
- The bar chart below shows the reasons for internet usage among British adults(2001) 59
- Describe the diagram about the hydroelectric dam 63
Essay evaluation report
Currently with extreme modernization and technology oriented world
Currently with an extremely modernized and technology oriented world
with more youth
with more youths
faster then ever with readily available materials.
faster than ever with readily available materials.
Sentence: Currently with extreme modernization and technology oriented world, over dependance on computers has had an obvious negative impact on the society.
Error: dependance Suggestion: dependence
Sentence: Humans are now made to work like machines and their inturn dependency on computers has had a more negative than positive impact.
Error: inturn Suggestion: intern
Sentence: Secondly, chronic diseases like heart strokes, obesity, hypertension are aceing up due to chronic sedentary lifestyles created as an impact of over dependance on this technology.
Error: dependance Suggestion: dependence
Error: aceing Suggestion: acting
Sentence: Over dependance on computers has made human's life robotic, with less interaction and more liability towards social media.
Error: dependance Suggestion: dependence
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flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 296 350
No. of Characters: 1584 1500
No. of Different Words: 187 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.148 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.351 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.785 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 125 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 97 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 67 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 49 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.143 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.093 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.357 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.33 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.553 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.051 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 463, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'faster than'?
Suggestion: faster than
...ve can be generated by searching online faster then ever with readily available materials. ...
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Line 5, column 470, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...be generated by searching online faster then ever with readily available materials. ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 172, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ial as they seem in todays world, their affect on human population has been drastic with ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50675675676 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87894138638 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64527027027 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8869895637 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.428571429 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249778592634 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794483526293 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831282336138 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158542654436 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120606979823 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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