Happiness is most desirable entity of life. It is an elusive holy grain, which not many people can accomplish. Happiness is considered to have a great significance in life. Part of the scientific challenge is to identify different kinds of happiness. In this essay i will discuss the difficulties that arise in defining it and some of the factors that are important in achieving happiness.
The definition of happiness varies from person to person. For some, it can be described as an inner feeling of contentment while, for others it can be seen in having simple fun. Nobody can understand or experience another person's feelings, as we have our own particular passions from which we take pleasure. For example, many people experience joy and fulfilment by earning money while, others get this pleasure from the amount of time spent with their family. In the same way, a range of other feelings such as, excitement or peacefulness, may be associated with happiness for a lot of people, however, vary in other human beings and thus it becomes extremely difficult to describe it.
Several factors can be included in achieving happiness in life. Firstly, there should be a sense of purpose in life for which we can strive. Secondly, there should be a balance between the mental and physical state of a person characterised by positive or pleasant emotions ranging form gratification to intense joy. People should be appreciate and be satisfied with the work they do. For example, my brother is more happier than I am because he appreciates and values his work, which gives him inner satisfaction and ample amount of joy. Although there has compromised a lot of things for his work, he is more happier than anyone around him. Finally, we must search for the right passion to live for and dedicate ourselves for the right cause for obtaining happiness.
In conclusion, happiness can bring drastic changes in our personal as well as, professional relationships. It can eliminate all the negative vibes around us. It can bring a positive influence on others. happiness can benefit our lives overall. therefore, we need to identify the types if happiness and joy within ourselves. Most important thing is to hold on to it and not let ourselves down. Being happy is the mantra that everyone has inside our hearts.
Essay evaluation report
It is an elusive holy grain, which not many people can accomplish.
It is an elusive holy grain, in which not many people can accomplish. //after 'which', put a verb
my brother is more happier
my brother is much happier
he is more happier
he is much happier
Sentence: For example, many people experience joy and fulfilment by earning money while, others get this pleasure from the amount of time spent with their family.
Error: fulfilment Suggestion: fulfillment
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flaws:
1. No. of Words: 388 350 //around 300-350 words are enough. there are some duplicated content. for example:
For example, my brother is more happier than I am because he appreciates and values his work, which gives him inner satisfaction and ample amount of joy. Although there has compromised a lot of things for his work, he is more happier than anyone around him.
the sentences are not developed so efficiently.
2. the conclusion is too long. one or two sentences are enough. read essays by those users:
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 388 350
No. of Characters: 1871 1500
No. of Different Words: 209 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.438 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.822 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.743 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 137 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 103 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 75 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 53 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.636 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.997 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.409 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.288 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.466 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.139 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 266, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...erent kinds of happiness. In this essay i will discuss the difficulties that aris...
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Line 1, column 328, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ficulties that arise in defining it and some of the factors that are important in achieving...
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Line 5, column 335, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'appreciated'?
Suggestion: appreciated
...cation to intense joy. People should be appreciate and be satisfied with the work they do....
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 413, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
...ork they do. For example, my brother is more happier than I am because he appreciates and va...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 607, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
...sed a lot of things for his work, he is more happier than anyone around him. Finally, we mus...
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Line 7, column 204, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Happiness
...n bring a positive influence on others. happiness can benefit our lives overall. therefor...
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Line 7, column 245, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...appiness can benefit our lives overall. therefore, we need to identify the types if happi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96391752577 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80291533242 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55412371134 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.9671131987 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.25 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 8.67935871743 253% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202050180372 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649956556306 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059429235123 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13105893478 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340776260961 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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