Computers are becoming an essential part of education.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.
By the advent of technology, education schemes not only have altered significantly but also, computers have become a fundamental part of education system. Although, computerize education system has several advantages, from my vantage point, it has its own challenges for users.
With today’s computer technology, students benefit from several opportunities, one of them is convenient access to the information. people often had to purchase and carry a great extent of books to access and use the information while, nowadays deployment of technology and birth of computers generate the possibility of clicking on a button and then achieving a variety of source of information. Electronic books for example, are available in the internet and people can access to their required books through computers quickly.
Despite the existence of benefits, computer based education system has its own defects and can be harmful for teenagers. Computer world is contained myriad number of information in any field so, teenagers can access to any information that they want. There are several kind of websites in the internet which are inappropriate and prohibited for the young people who are under 18 thus, by neglecting parents, teens can access these websites and be negatively affected. For instance, Sexual websites are not suitable for under 18 age users. In addition, computers can lead to a sedentary lifestyle in people and students because the existence of computer games can addicted people by its competitive area. Gamers often spend most of their time behind the computer therefore, they may become lag from their daily tasks or lessons.
In conclusion, this essay discussed about computer based education system benefits and drawbacks. Although, accessibility of information through the internet is comfortable, computers can be addictive and provide improper information for teenagers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...s convenient access to the information. people often had to purchase and carry a great...
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Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ent of technology and birth of computers generate the possibility of clicking on ...
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Line 5, column 262, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'several kinds'.
Suggestion: several kinds
...y information that they want. There are several kind of websites in the internet which are i...
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Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'kinds'?
Suggestion: kinds
...ation that they want. There are several kind of websites in the internet which are i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57785467128 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99826939703 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546712802768 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0675067702 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154460182098 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638761957514 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541288638816 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111020955985 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489372259669 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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