A variety of computers surrounds our daily life and we rely very much on those devices. In my opinion, to a large extent, computers are the most vital creation in the last century because of improvements in our life and the new inventions based on computers.
In the last hundred years, cyber technologies increase our life standard and work efficiency. Before the computers were invented, people had calculated on papers or mechanical devices. After people began using computers on every scale of life, such as traffic-light contorl system and navigation system, our life becomes better than the past. The other thing is that the computers help our working every day. The calcultion abilities of computers enhence our work efficiency. For instance, the computers of POS systems in supermarkets help the clerks to sum up customers' bill instandly. Those cyber devices make our life and word better.
Some people think that the Internet and smart phones are more innovative than computers in the past decades. Indeed, the Internet brings us many positive impacts, such as online shopping and social media. However, we browse social media and do online shopping on the computers. Although some people use smart phones instead of the computers, these phones, such as the iPhone and the Android, are just compact computers. Hence, computers contribute the inventions of the Internet and smart phones.
To sum up, I believe that the most vital creation in the last century is computer as its contributions on our life and working. The Internet and smart phones, which we spend time on in recent decades, are the new innovations of cyber technologies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14869888476 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70967254216 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53531598513 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2932050124 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5625 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8125 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.089569050084 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349560570803 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312266285285 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0598885050857 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202885476844 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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