Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Many people indeed believe computers are the biggest breakthrough in the development of human beings for almost a century, while in opposition point of view, some people will disagree. In my perspective, I think computers are the most important invention that human ever created.
We've been in the Industrial Revolution 4.0 with the drastically developing of digital technology which been contributed mostly by computers. On the one hand, computers provide us with a massive environment of work opportunities. Nowadays we can easily create any announcement recruitment on a platform about jobs to looking for potential candidates as much as we can with the smallest amount of time. It's happening all the same with the job seekers who want to find the most suitable chance of working for some companies, organization,... We can name some popular platforms in the world which created connections between employees and employers such as Indeed, CareerBuilder or LinkedIn,...
On the other hand, we can find a huge source of entertainment and connections via the internet by having a computer. Firstly, platforms serving entertaining demand such as websites relating to listening to music (e.g. Spotify), watching films (e.g. Netflix) or reading news and articles (e.g. CNN, BBC, Rolling Stone,...) holding a lot of contents that you're looking for and you can search about any fields quickly. Secondly, by using a computer, you can also keep in touch with family and friends anywhere in the world if you're far from home by activating on some social media platforms like Facebook, Twitter or Instagram,... Besides, you can make friends and have lots of new and wide connections that make you happier. Computers do you a favour when you can stay up to date with your well-known individuals or even your acquaintances in the most effective way.
In conclusion, although it still has some arguments about the role of computers in our life but I always believe that the greatest invention of human beings in almost 100 years ever is this kind of powerful machine.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, e.g., first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, all the same, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17014925373 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97157244835 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605970149254 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.518234508 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.714285714 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9285714286 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19811530125 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068429572219 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559977678957 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108635440335 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350075772897 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.