Many people argue that computers have become the most crucial invention in the last century. Personally, I disagree with this view because I believe that there are many vital inventions in the twentieth century, and some of them were more important than computers.
On the one hand, there are a couple of new devices more important than computers in over a hundred years. One of these inventions is the Internet. As a matter of fact, these days, most technological devices need to connect to the Internet to work effectively. For example, people can only make a video call or send an e-mail to someone who is far away with a technological device connected to the Internet. The second one that should be mentioned is the advent of planes. It is clear that a flight can easily transport a large group of individuals or goods between different continents more quickly than any previous vehicles.
Apart from the helpful devices expressed above, I believe that the most important invention of humans in the last century was vaccines. In my opinion, people will not have any opportunities to experience innovative technology if they die before. Therefore, the development of medication is the first priority and vaccines play a huge role in that innovation.Without using vaccines in medical methods, a large number of people might die each year because of diseases.
In conclusion, it is obviously unfair to deny the importance of computers in contributing to human life these days. However, I strongly believe that the invention of computers is not as crucial as other inventions, especially vaccines in the twentieth century.
- Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 67
- Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 78
- Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones Discuss both these views and give your own opinion Give reasons for your answer and include 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, apart from, for example, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13857677903 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00103551169 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580524344569 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.3254343796 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.727272727 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0909090909 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176105062935 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650472132341 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044182375574 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105402302016 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364636511162 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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