The gap between the rich and the poor is increasingly wide, as rich people become richer and poor people grow poorer. What problems could this situation cause? What are the solutions to address those problems?
It is true that there’s a huge distance between the rich and the poor and it keeps widening over time especially in the megacities you can easily find anywhere in the world. It’s the inevitable consequence of some problems that we’re still trying to deal with, however, there’re some effective ways to solve this big matter.
Firstly, I want to come up with the consequences it may cause for every country in general. On the one hand, the gap between the wealthy and the poverty could lead to the unstable growth of economic. It will affect to the demand or usage habits of civilians in every corner of the country because of its massive difference in the affordability of social, any kinds of adjustments about prices will cause a negative influence on the poor while in contrast to the rich, there’s no need for concern. Furthermore, this big distance about finance will affect the poor in many bad ways specifically is the increasing of crimes. When they can’t have enough money to pay their bill and take care of their family then they will turn out to be a criminal such as be a robbery or even a murderer. It will have negative impacts on the safety of society and the development of the country.
On the other hand, we still can try to focus and investigate in some effective solutions to cope with the results this position may cause. The government should spend their time for the poor especially to allocate money or supply goods in some public activities. They must investigate heavily in education, build more universities or colleges that meet the need of the middle-class and lower-class, to facilitate the capability of approaching school even in the far-flung areas. Besides, the authorities should have some policies to give out supports for the poor, for example, some preferential benefits about insurance for the poor or increasing the attempt to give them job opportunities good enough for them could build a stable living for the future.
In conclusion, we’ve all seen the drastically development about economic especially in the top-tier nations in the globe and we perceive about its consequences when making a huge gap between the wealthy and the poverty, however, we also understand about what things we could do to resolve this problem and people keep trying to gradually decrease the distance and avoid its negative impacts as much as possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, then, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in general, such as, in contrast to, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2022.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00495049505 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8293486794 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517326732673 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 641.7 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.1712453075 49.4020404114 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.538461538 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0769230769 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.8461538462 7.06120827912 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176380502128 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556020769441 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398382501536 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101016027373 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160913592387 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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