Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is argued that computers is considered as the most significant creation of the last decade. In my opinion, I partly agree with this idea.
It is true that the appearance of computers has changed our life significantly. Firstly, thanks to its features, we could complete our work with a small amount of time. For example, before computer were invented, people used to a calculator to calculate hundreds number which took a great deal of time to complete. However, by using the excel program on computers, this problem could be solved in seconds. Secondly, it seems that computers help us to protect our environment by decreasing the number of papers we use to document. With computers, a great deal of information can be digitize and stored without using papers.
In spite of those arguments above, I believe that the invention of internet is as important as that of computers. Internet revolutionized computers and makes them become more useful ever. For instance, with only computer, people just could work at offices or places where computers are set up. However, the appearance of internet helps people can work anywhere and anytime they want as long as their computers connects to a network. This have changed totally how people work nowadays. Moreover, internet also changes our way to contact people that we can use video call instead of the normal call.
In conclusion, I agree that the invention of computers has made our life changed. However, it is not the only invention which is important for people's life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in spite of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98823529412 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73433182876 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572549019608 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0670463849 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.5 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1875 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196961451344 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724416414137 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509585654189 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1512287993 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698526151384 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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