Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people hold the view that computers are often seen as the most significant invention over the hundred years. From my own perspective, I totally agree that invention of computers bring people about a wide variety of benefits and plays mostly the most important role in human lifestyle.
First of all, it is true that computers help people store a huge date and find information faster rather than traditional books. Indeed, capicity of a computer might keep data as large as a library , which enables human a faster access to knowledge than other tools. For example, instead of using books or papers, computers are usually placed a higher priority to save thousands of images and documents to support jobs or study. Besides that, design of a computer also allow people to bring or move easil, resulting in convenience in both work and study. As results, students might not manage in order to carry bulky books to school for the sake of study.
Another benefit computers can provide is speed of connection, which foster people connect others from long-distance countries. For instance, by a computer with Internet, students can learn and improve their knowledge like English with a native teacher. In addition, people can make friends through a computer instead of face-to-face dates, giving rise to chances of building relationship networks. Thanks to computers, gap between different countries will be narrowed significantly, promoting cooperation and developments over the world.
In conclusion, it seems to me that computers actually hold vital position in people's life because of a lot of benefits computers bring about.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 198, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...er might keep data as large as a library , which enables human a faster access to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, first, if, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22519083969 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78045838585 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641221374046 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.254869514 49.4020404114 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.083333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174967576237 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638477619997 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679878882931 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113440953798 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088028667785 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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