As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
There is an increasingly popular idea that businesses should be taken social responsibilities beside making profit. From my own perspective, i strongly support to the idea that businesses not only focus on making money but also need to have public repsonsibilities. For the reasons i will outline below.
To an certain extent, it is true that there are some benefits created from the efforts of companies to maximise their profits. Firstly, the higher the money earned by the businesses, the more taxes they pay. As a result, government can use this money to aid community such as building more schools and hospitals, or repairing roads. Secondly, enterprises might extend their scale if they earn huge profits, which generates a wide range of employment opportunities. By this way, the rate of the unemployment will decrease dramatically and people are capable of improving living conditions.
On the other hand, there are strong reasons why companies should also conduct their business in a socially responsible manner. The first reason is that their activities exert an enormous impact on the environment. For example, ecosystem are being degraded by irresponsible disposal of industrial waste and emissions from factories, which causes globle warming or greenhouse effects. Therefore, social responsibility will oblige them to install waste treatment system and control their business activities. In addition, this enables the companies to participate philanthropic actions such as supporting scholarships or giving charitable donations.
In conclusion, although fundamental principle of business is to make profits, i would argue that all businesses also should take social responsibilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.640625 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20916922113 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65234375 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2190367102 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.142857143 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209986399576 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659158741201 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854354961158 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152596301667 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950303946317 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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