Computers have been widely used in our daily life. How important is the computer in the development of modern society?
The world has stepped into the computer era. As a symbol of modern society, it has come into wide use and greatly promoted the development of our society. It is interesting that there are two-side effects such a positive development regarding calculating solution and communicating methods as well as a negative one in terms of security privacy information.
The computer, as we know, is a powerful instrument of calculation. It can perform almost all kinds of computations. By means of a computer, scientists can do special research which could never be done in the past. And engineer can deal with complex problems in engineering within a short time, which perhaps took years to solve without the computer. In addition, from space travel to bacteria research, from central government planning to the modern family affairs, the computer can make a significant contribution.
Furthermore, the computer as a perfect communication device has brought human beings much benefit. In Vietnam, you can get a message or information about financial matters from Britain, or from any other corner of the world. What is more, thanks to computer, people around the world are able to connect and work together even their far distance.
It is quite true that the use of computers is not without its problem. All types of computers can be manipulated. In this way, criminal activities are made possible, such as withdrawing someone else’s money from the bank.
But all in all, the advent of the computer brings many exciting prospects to our society. The precious gift will further benefit the world, and hopefully it will help us to create a newer and nicer world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The world has stepped into the computer ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, regarding, so, well, in addition, such as, as well as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13186813187 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88819883241 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6336996337 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.288444048 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5625 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173250923905 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593916068059 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686921777679 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979901393361 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585693650003 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.