The diagram shows how liquid domestic and industrial wastes are recycled
The diagram illustrates how effluent will be disposed from households and firms to the rivers or seas. The process consists of 5 main stages and variety of sub relevant sub steps.
At the beginning of the process, the domestic and industrial wastes are collected, then filtered by filter screen. As a result, the effluent is suspended to the large particles which are sent to the incinerator. Another result is that the filtered wastes are combined with starter culture by a bacteria tank. The bacteria-free sludge was dried by a sludge lagoon and liquid evaporation prior to being used as landfill. Otherwise, the wastes dissolving in chlorine is disinfected by a tank. it is a necessary step for the last stage that the effluent is cleaned in water and then goes to rivers or seas.
In conclusion, it can be seen that recycling liquid wastes is a crucial process which allows the wastes being friendly with the environment.
- the pie charts below show the persons arrested in the past five years, and the bar chart shows the reasons for most recent arrest in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 11
- Computers have been widely used in our daily life. How important is the computer in the development of modern society? 67
- The diagram shows how liquid domestic and industrial wastes are recycled 55
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ter and then goes to rivers or seas. In conclusion, it can be seen that recyc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 775.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93630573248 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79892643856 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579617834395 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.7427905266 43.030603864 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.1111111111 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229496682681 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074424261446 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692890904473 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13789633978 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452004076749 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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