consumer goods have become the most important part of human lives. do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
Goods are the inevitable part of human's life, which are generally required to fulfill basic needs of people as well as to make their life more comfortable and easier. However, one can not ignore the disadvantages which are associated with goods. Thus, I am going to furnish some advantages and disadvantages of consumer goods.
To begin with, the life without consumer goods is completely unimaginable, as goods exhibit manifold advantages in various forms. Firstly, accessibility of goods with ease has made people to carry out any work effectively, and in a more productive way. On the top of that, people had deprivation of many goods in time memorial as a result, completion of any work was a pipe dream. Furthermore, people were confined within certain boundaries because of lack of goods, but this long vacuum has been filled with the goods. Secondly, production of goods at a widespread level has indirectly ensured growth of the economy for any country which is again a favourable factor for the welfare of people. For instance, now, people are able to get information of every nook and cranny of the world with the the help of technology in the forms of television, which was a dream in past time for people.
However, every situation is accompanied with certain flaws, which is similar in this case. Consumer goods have now become a major source of pollution because now people buy more goods than their requirement on account of which many non biodegradable material of goods come on the land, thereby result in the death of animals and many other grim problems. In addition, people have completely engrossed themselves in various goods, whereby they are becoming cynical and lethargic, which in turn breeds many fatal ailments, consequently it becomes major hindrance in people's success.
In conclusion, It is an unequivocal that life is implausible without goods, but one should always utilise goods as per his/her requirement, here advantages outstrip disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06896551724 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80488072175 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570532915361 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3780070383 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.384615385 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9230769231 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174800939525 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624498949371 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563171341533 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111198717531 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222321221858 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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