Consumers are facing an increasing number of advertisements from competing companies.
To what extent do you think advertisements influence consumers? What measures can be taken to protect them?
In modern days, people are experiencing an exponential rise in advertisements from different companies that are selling similar products. I strongly believe that this excessive promotion culture is highly manipulating consumers’ purchasing behavior as the super attractive commercials can easily mobilize the audience's attention. However, proper governmental initiatives like raising consumer awareness and setting up an advertisement monitoring committee can be effective measures to address this advertisement frenzy.
Firstly, one of the crucial factors is some large companies would invest a huge amount of money in advertisements to draw people’s attention to purchase the product. In addition, they might utilize a wide variety of tools for promotion, such as outdoor advertising and celebrity endorsement. For instance, a company places its adverts in a popular area and uses attractive colors to design, as a result, when potential consumers come across these attractions, their purchase decisions get influenced heavily. Furthermore, many companies hire well-known celebrities as their endorsement to let their brand seem trustworthy. Fans of these idols are their target market. Some sellers even go one step ahead, to induce possible buyers, they use instant temptation in the name of trying their products or services with free trials.
However, some dishonest companies might include misleading and false information to make profits and neglect the public interest where the government can play effective roles to check this deception. It is recommended to set up an independent committee to regulate and manage the quality of the advertisement. A clear and standard guideline is needed to make sure that advertisers understand and obey the requirements. Furthermore, the government can educate the public to stay vigilant on advertisements through various online and offline platforms like social media, seminars, and occasional campaigns. These approaches can alert consumers to do in-depth research and investigate the facts before making their purchase decisions.
In conclusion, due to sheer competition among companies, misleading advertisement culture is rampant nowadays, so governments need to establish monitoring cells and raise mass consumer awareness to deal with this rising concern.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 310, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'audiences'' or 'audience's'?
Suggestion: audiences'; audience's
...ive commercials can easily mobilize the audiences attention. However, proper governmental...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1982.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.89880952381 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19376163461 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66369047619 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3471704331 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.133333333 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227848789251 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070232884681 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566137555554 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137555370272 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692211052827 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.24 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.6 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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