Consumer's goods are important in everyone's life.Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
With the tremendous influence of globalization, there has indeed been a paradigm shift of gaining financial reputation by selling and manufacturing buyer's products.Along with its admiration and praises,it also brings a few suspicions and fears,these will chronologically be discussed with an appropriate conclusion.
In the epoch of consumerism, everyone can be furnished thousands of merits with an earning source of commodities.If the present scenario is manifested neutrally,it would be realised that the most of the developing nations rely on the hands of employees and shopkeepers to fulfill basic requirements.It implies that the employment level is directly proportional to the demand of purchaser's products.
As long as the another pivotal benefit is concerned,it is associated with the country's financial reputation.The consumer goods boost up the economy and the standard of living.Therefore,the life becomes more luxurious and comfortable.Sometimes,due to an ascent in demand,there is a necessity of more numbers of workers to usher an industry's goals.Ultimately,this sort of certain cycle creates more opportunities and propels an economical level at its peak.
As roses are accompanied by thorns,in the similar sense,people seem to be more workaholic and engage at workplace to obtain the desired result.Undoubtedly,this will affect on one's mentality.For instance,the overtime duty of a labour leads to some serious disorders.Such as,headache and mental stress are the most common illnesses among the community of an employee.By the way,the health regarding issues seen to be more frequent come as a tricky period due to promises of a boss.
After the scrutinisation of both the facets,it can be summarised that the consumer goods are having a domination in everyone's life.In my eyes,the detrimental effects of buyer's products are overwhelmed by its more plus points.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, therefore, for instance, sort of, such as, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78494623656 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.93554589266 2.80592935109 140% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627240143369 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 20.2975951904 271% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.641016654 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 322.8 106.682146367 303% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.8 20.7667163134 269% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.6 7.06120827912 221% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0542996024287 0.244688304435 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354792252234 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405132044662 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0354792252234 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405132044662 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.7 13.0946893788 257% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.27 50.2224549098 -3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 11.3001002004 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.13 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.7 8.58950901804 148% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.1190380762 237% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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