The consumption of the world’s resources (oil and water, etc.) is increasing at a dangerous rate. What are the causes and solutions?
Nowadays, all over the world, a tremendous amount of natural resources are consumed by humans increasingly, which is critical. Growing population and the cost of resources are by far the most effective factors of this issue, and authorities should pose several rules and laws to solve that.
One of the prominent phenomena which societies involve is increasing the rate of birth and decreasing that of death, which leads to a significant rise in the population. The more population grows, the more resources will be used. To tackle this problem, this growth should be controlled by governments all over the world. For instance, they could pose a law that every couples are permitted to born less than two children. This could be an appropriate attempt due to population controlling and as a result, declining the resources usage.
Another reason which made the resource usage rate grow is the price. The cheaper the resources are, the fewer concerned people are due to the overuse of them. So authorities could raise the costs of these resources. For example, if a household gas consumption progresses more than a specific amount, the expenditure of each unit will be increased, and vice versa, if that of a family declined less than the defined amount, as a reward, they will pay less than the real cost. It is said that human conduct is affected by the amount of money they have to pay. Then money could act as a prevented factor.
In conclusion, the major reason by which the resources consumption grows is densely-populated communities as well as the low price of the resources. So both of them should be managed according to each community’s circumstance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'resources'' or 'resource's'?
Suggestion: resources'; resource's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'resources'' or 'resource's'?
Suggestion: resources'; resource's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97849462366 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90673269324 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3601160983 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110677098441 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380104564315 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336844806424 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704216731551 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0110538733535 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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