?Some people believe that certain old buildings are worth preserving more than other buildings.
?What type of old buildings is worth preserving? Do the advantages of preserving these buildings outweigh the disadvantages?
Todays, paying attention to preserving monuments and ancient structures has increased more than ever. the value of some special old buildings are considered more than others by some critics.
I compleately agree with this critic, and believe some of those represent our history significantly ,and can make special benefits for communities.
Structures and buildings have a vital place in showing the history of societies. They are counted as by far the most important objects in illustrating the cultural herritage.It does not mean that all of the old buildings are worth the same, only some of them which are built by special architectural techniques, or are the symbol of an impressive historical events which hve had a magnificant role in the history of the countries should be cared specificaly. For example there are several styles in art history, such as modernism, post-modernism, classic, artnew, deconstruction, which have evidenced in a certain point in history, and represent a specific duration and era in that. These structures are evaluated as those buildings which are much more worth to protect.
Protecting valued buildings expenses extreamly much. They should be renewed frequently, preserving from vandalisms, and make plenty of responsibilities for governments. on the other hands, they are the social invest and cultural heritages, and have internal value. Also, they could be a source of revenue for societies as the turist attractions, and consequencely make job opportunities for citisens, and have a potentioal to decrease the unemployment rate. So I think the benefites they could bring into societies outweigh of the drawbacks.
In conclusion, some buildings and monuments are more worth than others that they should be protected by communities, since not only are they the cultural heritage, but they also could lead to a source of income and turist destination.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40878378378 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1394261612 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554054054054 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 0.809619238477 1112% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.1337134734 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.153846154 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280186821114 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106537668214 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911322153691 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158767341813 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0996930997651 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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