In contemporary society, everyone should have equal opportunities in education. Therefore, universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Since the beginning of the 21st century, the entire world community has been using multiple ways of gaining knowledge in various areas of their lives. An opinion exists that all individuals need to have similar rights to a degree and that gender equality should be respected. Although I believe that sexual identity balance in academic institutions is important, everyone should have an opportunity to learn new skills and crafts.
On the one hand, a person of any gender can cope with any humanitarian or technical task, if proper training is provided. Nowadays a female can be a taxi driver; a man can be a ballet teacher or anybody else. Modern life is fast, so it's the quality of the services provided that is appreciated, and not specifically who provides them or how they look. For example, my grandmother in the Soviet Union dreamed of becoming a mechanical engineer and became the most demanded specialist in the rocket industry. Thus, highly qualified specialists who can do the job quickly are significant and it does not matter what sex they are.
On the other hand, some jobs might require physical strength, speed of reaction and ability to work under severe pressure which is unlikely to be met in most women due to anthropology science. No wonder military services in various countries all around the world mainly accept males in case of active hostilities. For instance, my cousin dreamed to become a firefighter but she was not accepted in college due to her inability to lift supreme heavy objects. Hence, numerous professions entail specific capabilities to execute operations smoothly, fast and unscathed
Taking everything into consideration, even though universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject, modern life predispose job duties to be delivered rapidly and effective.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, so, thus, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15719063545 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.830739674 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685618729097 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1471281545 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189990102587 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543249689813 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724539496616 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126738719321 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10828365147 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.