Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional foods methods of preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
it is believed that convenience foods are going to become crucial and conventional foods preparation is displaced for convenience once. From my perspective, I trust that they are considered junk foods and unlikely to grow in the new popularity due to health concerns and environmental factors.
Although, many arguments surrounding fast food play a significant role and become wild-used in this era because of its convenience, in fact, that, people currently acknowledge the importance of physical and mental health by social development. Despite the hectic life schedule of most people these days, they still tend to basically spend time making their owns meals instead of using junk foods. Due to the warning information involved to the adverse impacts of ready to eat foods on social media sites, consumers are increasingly aware of the risk disease in this food ingredient including saturated fat, refined sugar,….which is the major reasons for heart disease, obesity, diabetes, blood pressure and many others kind of health problems. So home-cooking meals or more healthy options become the priority choices.
Besides the health factors, the main reason for the drop in convenience foods may because of environmental prevention. Conventional food-making methods will contribute to protecting people's earth in more efficient ways in order to protect than industrial ones. To produce one bag of chicken nuggets, they may release large amounts of emission into the atmosphere leading to global warming. Due to the industrial manufacturing process, they require myriad energy to operate working. More fossil fuels will be wasted. Moreover, an enormous volume of plastic trash is generated for industrial production. Thus, organic and natural healthy produced foods will be more the preferred choice in the future due to the increase in living standards
In conclusion, I truly believe convenience food consumption will be declined mainly because of the priorities in health and the environment. In my point view, the business should embrace this tendency and create more healthy options instead.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, may, moreover, so, still, thus, in conclusion, in fact, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50773993808 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93833005494 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628482972136 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.7018557154 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.071428571 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237063209626 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786057473676 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874581877911 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157482125722 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578154084912 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.