Countires are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.Do you think this is a positive or a negative development.

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Countires are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or a negative development.

The world is becoming similar to a little village where anyone is able to buy a certain product from whichever place on the globe with few mouse clicks on a computer. This has made everything easier and less time consuming while people seem to be always busy these days.

International trade has allowed new types of cuisines from other countries to be introduced to the market, such as thai, chinese and mexican food in the UK. It has also made exotic goods readily available in town, meaning that you don’t have to travel all the way to Iran to get a well woven rug.

It is sometimes argued that the flood of new foreign items has made some communities lose their identity. For example the old-fashioned English breakfast is now replaced with the american cereals, burgers are now more common than fish and chips and lasagnes have made shepherd’s pie almost forgotten. However, the british were never known for cooking well and these can be viewed as an improvement to the food in our fridge.

Globalisation also facilitate exchange of knowledge making it possible to learn about other cultures and explore their past, values, beliefs and aspirations. This understanding has in its core the factors that can bring about peace among nations as violence has always been associated with ignorance and the alienation of other societies.

All in all, strengthening connections among countries has a wide variety of advantages, some may resist the change but the latter has always been a part of our advancement as a species, therefore, this specific kind of relation around the sphere shouldn’t be discouraged.

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Comments

Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'kind of', 'such as']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244224422442 0.247107183377 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.178217821782 0.155533422707 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0990099009901 0.0946595960268 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0528052805281 0.0501214627716 105% => OK
Pronouns: 0.029702970297 0.0437548338989 68% => OK
Prepositions: 0.108910891089 0.122226691241 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0693069306931 0.0403226058552 172% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82252598735 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.03300330033 0.0326793684256 101% => OK
Particles: 0.003300330033 0.00163938923432 201% => OK
Determiners: 0.105610561056 0.0861772015684 123% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00990099009901 0.021408717616 46% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00660066006601 0.011925033212 55% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1630.0 1933.35771543 84% => OK
No of words: 270.0 316.048096192 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03703703704 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.337037037037 0.374742101984 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.262962962963 0.28420135186 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.177777777778 0.203846283523 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.125925925926 0.137316102897 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82252598735 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.037074148 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644444444444 0.56093040696 115% => OK
Word variations: 74.0992114261 60.7387585426 122% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0891783567 62% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.7743622355 130% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3 49.517814964 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.0 127.492653851 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7743622355 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.3 0.814263465372 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 53.2962962963 49.1944974215 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.62025316456 1.69124875643 96% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292609076684 0.332605444948 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.105276539003 0.102741220458 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0578934157371 0.0668466124924 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.666812485339 0.534860350844 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.149378405011 0.148594505496 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123420639293 0.134430193775 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505209241347 0.0742795772207 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.245760510028 0.324371583561 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0245728727434 0.0638462369009 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169155514247 0.228012699653 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055142014764 0.058150111329 95% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 10.4468937876 67% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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